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Chapter 1: The Money She Stole

The day my father discovered that someone had used my identity to request $6,000 for cosmetic surgery, my stepmother was still insisting that stealing my college savings was an act of love.

I was seventeen years old. I had $2,840 in my bank account, a dream of going to college, and a family I thought I could trust.

I was wrong about all three.

My name is Hannah Brooks, and until that Thursday afternoon, I believed the worst thing Karen, my stepmother, could do was take money that didn't belong to her.

I'd spent eight months working evenings at a grocery store three miles from our house. I stocked shelves, bagged groceries, cleaned spilled milk from the floors, and occasionally stayed late when someone called in sick.

My friends spent their paychecks on clothes and concert tickets.

I saved mine.

Every Friday, I transferred most of my earnings into a separate savings account. I kept a small envelope in my bedroom with my latest bank statement and a handwritten note that read:

*COLLEGE FUND. DO NOT TOUCH.*

It wasn't much, but every dollar represented something.

Freedom.

I wanted to attend a state university, study nursing, and eventually rent an apartment where nobody could tell me what I was allowed to eat, wear, or dream about.

My father, Daniel, supported me.

Karen thought it was ridiculous.

One Saturday morning, I walked into the kitchen and found her scrolling through her phone while Madison, my sixteen-year-old stepsister, complained about her laptop.

"Mom, seriously, I can't use this thing anymore," Madison said, turning the screen toward her.

"It freezes every five minutes.""

Karen sighed dramatically.

"Your father needs to do something about that.""

Dad was working a double shift that weekend.

I poured myself cereal.

"Maybe you could save up for a new one," I said.

Madison looked at me as if I'd insulted her.

"Excuse me?""

"I'm just saying. I work. You could get a part-time job too.""

Karen slowly lowered her phone.

"Hannah, not everything in this house needs to become a competition.""

"I'm not competing with anyone.""

"Then stop acting like you're better than your sister because you have a little savings account.""

I put my spoon down.

"I never said that.""

Madison rolled her eyes.

"Whatever. Some people actually have parents who help them.""

I didn't answer.

I had learned that arguing with Madison was like throwing water into a bottomless hole.

But Karen wasn't finished.

"Family means sharing," she said.

"Especially when someone needs something.""

I looked directly at her.

"My college money isn't family money.""

Her expression hardened.

"Watch your attitude.""

I took my cereal upstairs.

That should have been the end of it.

Three days later, I came home from work and noticed my bedroom door was open.

I always closed it.

My desk drawers were slightly crooked. The papers on my desk had been moved, and the small envelope I'd kept beside my bank statement was gone.

I checked under my mattress.

Nothing.

I searched my backpack, my dresser, and the drawer where I kept old receipts.

Then I heard Madison laughing downstairs.

I walked into the living room.

She was sitting on the couch with a brand-new silver laptop resting on her knees. The packaging was still on the coffee table.

"Nice laptop," I said.

Madison grinned.

"Thanks. Mom got it for me.""

My stomach tightened.

"How much?""

"Almost three thousand.""

I stared at her.

"Where did she get that kind of money?""

Karen appeared from the kitchen carrying a mug of coffee.

"Don't start, Hannah.""

I looked at her.

"Where's my envelope?""

She didn't even pretend to misunderstand.

"Your savings were just sitting there.""

I felt my face grow hot.

"You took it?""

Karen placed her mug on the table.

"I borrowed it.""

"Without asking me?""

"Madison needed a computer for school.""

"Then Dad could have discussed it with me!""

Karen laughed bitterly.

"Your father already has enough financial responsibilities. You should be grateful someone in this house is willing to help your sister.""

I turned toward Madison.

"You knew?""

Madison stopped typing.

"What?""

"You knew Mom took my money?""

She shrugged.

"It's just money.""

I couldn't believe what I was hearing.

"That's eight months of work.""

"Then work another eight months," she replied.

Karen stepped between us.

"That's enough. You're making your sister feel guilty over something that belongs to the family.""

I looked at her.

"That money doesn't belong to the family. I earned it.""

Her voice dropped.

"Keep pushing, Hannah, and you'll find out how much your father appreciates having a difficult daughter.""

I went upstairs before I said something I couldn't take back.

For twenty minutes, I sat on my bedroom floor staring at the empty space where the envelope had been.

Then I heard Dad's truck pull into the driveway.

The front door opened.

"Hey, everybody. I'm home.""

I rushed downstairs.

"Dad?""

He looked at my face and immediately stopped smiling.

"What happened?""

Karen appeared behind me.

"Daniel, before she starts exaggerating—"

"Someone took my savings," I interrupted.

Dad looked between us.

"What savings?""

"My college money. All $2,840.""

His expression changed.

He turned toward Karen.

"Is that true?""

Karen folded her arms.

"I used it for Madison. She needed a laptop.""

"You took Hannah's money?""

"It was sitting in an envelope!""

"That doesn't answer my question.""

Madison closed her laptop.

"Can everyone stop making such a big deal?""

Dad ignored her.

He walked into my bedroom, examined the empty envelope, and picked up my bank statement.

Then he noticed something I hadn't.

A second page had been folded behind it.

He unfolded it.

His eyes moved across the document.

Once.

Twice.

Then he looked at me.

"Hannah, what is this?""

I took the paper from him.

It was a bank notification showing a pending medical preauthorization request for $6,000.

The provider was a private cosmetic surgery clinic in Atlanta.

I read it again.

I had never visited that clinic.

I'd never requested a procedure.

I'd never authorized a payment.

Dad's jaw tightened.

"Did you apply for anything medical recently?""

"No.""

"Did you give anyone your insurance information?""

"No.""

Karen suddenly became very interested in the coffee mug in her hands.

Dad noticed.

"Karen?""

She didn't answer.

He pulled out his phone.

"We're calling the bank.""

And for the first time since I'd known her, my stepmother looked genuinely afraid.

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Because the stolen $2,840 wasn't the only thing she'd taken.

And whatever that $6,000 request was connected to, it was about to expose something much worse.

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